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 The Minato Chronicles - First look - please comment!, An epic story in progress
tommyblank
14 March 2010 18:21
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The city in the morning. (That's Stonemason's Urban Future 2 and Walled City)



The scene of the crime. The blood doesn't look very convincing yet, but working on a new version of this deadly bathroom anyway.



Downtown

The port
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The Lord

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tommyblank
14 March 2010 18:23
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Hm, it wont display the pictures. i gotta try again.
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tommyblank
14 March 2010 23:07
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watertje1
15 March 2010 02:55
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Nice work you put in.
Pitty not all is full color. It would show more, because i link the chinese boat scenes against the huge buildings in the back, where maybe some old buildings in front would do no harm.

Anyway it is great work you show us laughing
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tommyblank
15 March 2010 14:58
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watertje1,
Thanks. I got the colored versions too. I just want to have this particular duplex for a story. Still a lot more to sort out
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Sebalon
15 March 2010 15:11
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Some very good renders you got going on there. The sepia renders are great too just not so sure about the dystopia city blocks rendered in sepia though, they do look ok its just that theyre not as good quality as the stuff in the foreground on the port pic and they kinda stand out. Maybe if you try some different shaders on 'em? Something a little more grungy maybe? Not sure if you used daz or poser but if you look around you may find something suitable for either app.
Regardless of what you do with the textures though, you deffo have some great scenes going on and i can see you've put a lot of effort into 'em. I especially like the sense of depth in the port pic with all the different buildings in the background and foreground ..plus the boat and dock works really well.

I'd love to know what you have in mind for this story so be sure to keep us all updated! smile

(edit) come to think of it though ...a bit of dof on the scenes would solve what i talked about.

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gemski
15 March 2010 15:50
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awesome work!! cant wait to see the story that goes with these pics love
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sagenoel
15 March 2010 20:04
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great work
love the concept and the black and white work huge fan of that
look forward to the rest:)

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tommyblank
17 March 2010 12:58
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Thanks guys!

Yeah, the Dystopia background needs some extra texture work. So little time....

Uhoh, what is "dof"?
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lh7
18 March 2010 00:00
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Great renders! They really look like a location rather than a mish mash of buildings, although I wouldn't want to live there (or use that bathroom!).
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dlefik2008
18 March 2010 02:23
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tommyblank
22 March 2010 13:23
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Honestly, you don't want to use that bathroom! Horrible things happen there.
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Naughty
23 March 2010 22:18
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The bathroom makes me feel dirty lol.

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